evildoers: (rescue • it was like that when I got it)
Ellie ([personal profile] evildoers) wrote2010-05-13 12:37 am

The New Phase: Prologue

"There are always some greats in every phase. Indigo Lass, Ulysses, Lt. Slam. Heroes whose names for some reason refuse to leave the public eye when they do. I mean, look at Naysayer. We've had one once a year since 1979. Sometimes more. They don't give out her powerset much since Naysayer XII demolished the west wing of the houses of parliament during a fight with the Manbear.

Not Bear-man, that guy a few months ago with the mechanical claws. The shapeshifter.

It can get a little confusing if you don't check the rosters."


The teaser/prologue for my project 'The New Phase' is now up at http://phase.birdfeets.com/ ! Being a collaborative work with the excellent [personal profile] orm, it is wonderfully illustrated and hosted on his site for maximum cool.

LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK! I welcome crit and feedback like a lung welcomes oxygen.

It also helps to know that I was listening to Suit Up! by X-Ray Dog for the entire writing session. It's dramatic stuff.
zaluzianskya: (Afghanis-tan // Littlest country)

[personal profile] zaluzianskya 2010-10-04 01:28 pm (UTC)(link)
I want to keep reading this. :(
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[personal profile] zaluzianskya 2010-10-04 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
omg nano I forgot about that

YOU DO NOT HAVE TO DO THAT, I can wait for the finished product :D (I mean unless you want to)